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Lazy sentences (lazy author?)

When editing my own work, the following words keep popping up and are almost always indicators of a sentence that just isn’t right or is carrying a few too many kilos:
- here
- there
- though
- now
These are worse than adverbs for me and deserving of instant death.
I blame the sentences. Tisn’t my fault.

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I hunt and destroy "just" because that's the one that keeps popping up in mine

January 17, 2011 | Unregistered Commenteramanda

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